Friday, September 3, 2010

A Slow June Day


Yo quiero
Je te veux
Is it good because it's
forbidden?
Or is it forbidden
Because it's (so) good?

Déshabille-moi
Yo quiero
Roll your tongue
Like you roll your r's
All over where
You roll your eyes
Inside of me

You have left
Your scent on me
Like traces of DNA
Yo quiero
I'm hungry
I'm willing
I can still smell you

Déshabille-moi
Undress me
Without touching me
Don't take away
Your eyes
They keep me alive
They keep me warm
Like hot apple pie
On a slow June day

Another Magpie Tale. You know, by reading my stories one could easily think I was quite the sexual person. In all honesty, I don't know where this comes from... Maybe Willow's images evoke a very sensual side of me, a side that is sleeping... Maybe.
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13 comments:

  1. Marilyn & JeffSeptember 4, 2010 at 12:36 AM

    Fabulous magpie!

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  2. ninotazizSeptember 4, 2010 at 5:08 AM

    Je veux plus!

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  3. BerowneSeptember 4, 2010 at 6:00 AM

    Me gusta. By the way, that title, "Cyber House Rules"? Clever...

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2010 at 6:59 AM

    This was really great! I love coming over to see what you've written each week at Magpie.

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  5. HelenSeptember 4, 2010 at 8:18 AM

    Seriously sensuous .....

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  6. Brian MillerSeptember 4, 2010 at 9:36 AM

    that was hot...like apple pie...smiles. sensual indeed. nice mag!

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  7. ClaudiaSeptember 4, 2010 at 11:18 AM

    oh wow - can't stop thinking of hot apple pie after reading this…great write
    here's my magpie

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  8. Marie NicoleSeptember 4, 2010 at 10:00 PM

    @ Marilyn: thanks
    @ Ninotaziz: merci!
    @ Berowne: in mexico I once told a server Me Gusto, my husband thought I was telling the waiter I thought he was hot! Thanks, I'm pretty proud of my title!
    @ Catherine: thanks for introducing me to this, can you tell I enjoy it?
    @ Helen: thank you, seriously! (he he he i love the sensuality side of it!)
    @ Brian: when I read YOUR magpie's I think: this guy could teach me a lot about writing...
    @ Claudia: thanks!

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  9. Tess KincaidSeptember 5, 2010 at 8:14 AM

    ...rrrrrrrr!!! (lots of tongue rolling)

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  10. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 5, 2010 at 9:28 AM

    wow,
    left scents on u...
    very touching line...

    apple pie is hot, sweet, and crisp on edges..

    elegant tale.

    My Magpie

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  11. Tumblewords:September 5, 2010 at 5:33 PM

    Delicious and tasty.

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  12. steviewrenSeptember 5, 2010 at 9:48 PM

    Hot, hot, hot...like a hot apple pie....could I have mine a la mode please?

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  13. Kathe W.September 6, 2010 at 9:50 AM

    Hot and tasty ....caliente y sabroso!
    chaud et délicieux!

    Great Magpie- love it!

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