Sunday, April 15, 2012

55 - Crossing Over

Mr Know It All
The day I turned 
eighteen, 
I stuffed all my 
stuffed toys in a box. 
Left it in the hallway.
Hours later 
I tripped 
over it. 
With a bruised toe 
and a swollen hand 
I couldn’t help but wonder 
if I really was ready for 
becoming an adult. 

Would I forever trip over my childhood?

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I'd been reading Brian's stories told in 55 words or less. Assuming I could never do it, I never tried. Being sick has privileges: I tried, and accomplished the challenge. Try it out here.


10 comments:

  1. yay! you rocked it too...and there are many a day i trip over my childhood...smiles...and i am still not ready to be an adult....smiles.

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    1. Yay Brian! :) It was actually fun, and wanna know a little secret? I wrote that story just now, then checked out G-Man's link and thought "now what are the odds that his image would be so appropriate???"

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  2. being adult is so overrated. great execution!

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  3. The past is always part of our present. ~Mary

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  4. "Would I forever trip over my childhood?"
    WOW... that is one of the most beautiful sentences i have read in a while, nikki..

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    1. Why thank you very much! I do aim to please...

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  5. Really good and totally true! I've had a ton of therapy to NOT trip over my childhood, but it's still there, always! That little guy is still causing me problems by trying to protect me...

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    1. I like to imagine myself, as I am today, holding me as I was at 3 or 5 years old, scared and uncertain, and just running my hands in her hair telling her she'll grow up to be a marvelous woman...

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