Saturday, August 14, 2010
Défauts cachés - Hidden Flaws
I have a secret
J'ai un secret
I keep it deep inside
Il est loin et creux
Some say
It's what makes me strong
J'ai un secret
Some say
It's what makes me weak
J'ai un secret
I keep it deeply hidden
Under layers and layers
J'ai un secret - I have a secret
Wanne see it?
I'll show you mine
If you show me yours
J'ai un secret
Look under the layers
Pull away the covers
But don't look now
J'ai un secret
Wait 'til I'm gone
But look, please find my flaws
Wait 'til I'm gone
I don't want to see
Your eyes when you see
J'ai un secret - I have a secret
I want you to see but I can't see
Won't see
Your eyes when you see
Can you tolerate my flaws?
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Ohhh... I LOVE secrets!
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Wow and double wow! This is so unique and clever. Great Magpie!
ReplyDeleteI like the playful repetitive "J'ai un secret". Nice one!
ReplyDeletei like the repetition, i'm always a fan of french. cool magpie.
ReplyDeleteOoohhh, this was fun!
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you found Magpie! I love what you do with it each week!
ReplyDeleteGreat write...love the secrets ...show and tell or do not tell...great fun...bkm
ReplyDeleteVery nice !
ReplyDeleteand i hope they love you in spite of the flaws and the secrets...nice mag!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely a unique take on this picture. I like the French touch.
ReplyDeleteYou know, I was just thinking the other day that you should post your comments on my blog in french. Did I ever mention I studied french for 8 years? And haven't spoken or read it in almost 10. I think that's very sad.
ReplyDeleteI love repetition and teasing secrets. This is wonderful!
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